Ideas and Constructive Criticism NEEDED (Newmarket)

I need to find willing participants to read my book. Electromagnetic Romance. It's takes a grasp on the horrific events of a young man's life, Ayase. It does include Adult material, and is LGBT. The over all book is not finished, rather I have many ideas, and I have not yet formed them into chapters yet. The over all scenario is; Arm bands that that identify who your soulmate is. Ayase's seems to malfunction. Or did it? He is caught between his Yakuza abuser, and a secretive best friend. Both have hidden agendas. Ayase has to figure out what he's going to do, before the trouble really starts. Will he be caught and killed? Or will he be loved for who he is. Torn between two paths he must make a decision.
I will be grateful for your time. Please contact me if you are interested.
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